Last week Mary told her friends that when Devin sees her “it will be perfect.” We pick up there…
~~~***~~~
“Of course, it will,” Sara answered with just a small sound of sarcasm. “You know you are beautiful.”
“Sara, stop.” The topic of her looks made Mary nervous.
“Mary, you have shiny black hair to your waist, green eyes, dimples, and a natural tan. What’s not to like?” Sara had to lie out in the sun for weeks to get her skin color close.
~~~***~~~
Be sure to check out the rest of this weeks offerings. Http://www.sixsunday.com
Graylin
June 26, 2011 at 7:21 am
I like the agitated dialogue, they are both really quite prickly, thank you for a great six.
June 26, 2011 at 8:36 am
Good look at both personalities. Nice work.
June 26, 2011 at 8:51 am
The conversation really highlights where these two friends are coming from.
June 26, 2011 at 8:52 am
Mary needs a little spark of confidence. I hope she finds it soon.
June 26, 2011 at 9:53 am
Awww she needs a good friend to boost up her confidance!!! Sara seems like that friend!
Love it!
Xx
A.
June 26, 2011 at 11:05 am
Great six!
June 26, 2011 at 11:11 am
Long black hair and green eyes – she does sound pretty!
June 26, 2011 at 12:08 pm
hmm, interesting relationship between the two.
June 26, 2011 at 12:33 pm
She sounds very pretty. The dialogue also bounced back very easily. Great job, girl!
June 26, 2011 at 1:06 pm
Love it, Graylin..but then I always do enjoy your six snippet
June 26, 2011 at 1:21 pm
I hope Devin’s worth all her anxiety. Nice six.
June 26, 2011 at 1:24 pm
These two really are great friends! Great six!
June 26, 2011 at 7:05 pm
Sara’s just a little bit creepy! Great job.
June 26, 2011 at 8:04 pm
Love the dialogue between the two. It is so real
June 26, 2011 at 8:44 pm
Excellent way to work in Mary’s description — and to show her character, along with Sara’s.
June 26, 2011 at 8:57 pm
She sounds beautiful to me.
June 26, 2011 at 9:29 pm
Sounds like Sara’s a wee bit jealous, and Mary’s not got much confidence. Great snippet!
June 27, 2011 at 12:04 am
I think this is a Fae story, right? Which I love. I’ve always been fascinated with the live of the Fae.
Love your cover art too, Graylin. Very attractive.
Well done on getting a description of the character in.
Best, Keta
Cradle of Dreams 6SS
June 27, 2011 at 6:49 am
This is a pure thriller Keta. No fae or paranormal in this ebook.
June 27, 2011 at 3:53 pm
Hmmmm… Wonder why she’s nervous. Something about her looks must be distinctive? Guess I will have to read more to find out! Great Six!
June 27, 2011 at 4:05 pm
Hmm. There’s definitely tension here. I wonder why? And what the one girl’s looks have to do with it?