Your Biggest Fan released July 15, 2011. It’s a novella length thriller that takes us through the life of Mary. Her loves, her passions, and what happens when tragedy strikes.
Mary found love in high school with Billy but does it last?
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“You are leaving me,” Mary felt her stomach lurch and began to feel suffocated in his car. Grasping for the door handle, she struggled to get out.
She gasped for breath, and Billy ran around the car to help her out. He held her until she could breathe steadily again and then stepped back. The joy on his face wasn’t hidden by his concern for her. Men leave.
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Graylin
July 31, 2011 at 7:28 am
Oh Mary I want to give her a cuddle, I’m feeling terribly mother toward her. Great six! Thank you.
July 31, 2011 at 7:29 am
‘The joy on his face wasn’t hidden by his concern for her’ – what a git. Great six, though!
July 31, 2011 at 9:01 am
“Men leave” – a very sad thought.
July 31, 2011 at 9:41 am
Aww, Mary…I feel your pain.
Nice six !!
July 31, 2011 at 10:02 am
Mary is very conflicted. I’m wondering how Billy handles it all. Great six!
July 31, 2011 at 10:43 am
Poor Mary.
July 31, 2011 at 10:56 am
Aw, Mary. You can totally feel her heartbreak.
July 31, 2011 at 11:41 am
beautifully written… I can sense her impending loss.
cheers
Liz
July 31, 2011 at 11:43 am
Men Leave. Sums it all up nicely.
July 31, 2011 at 11:45 am
Poor Mary! I hope she gets a break. C’mon, Billy, don’t leave!
July 31, 2011 at 11:45 am
My heart breaks for her. Poor Mary…
July 31, 2011 at 1:14 pm
He’s feeling/showing joy instead of concern when he breaks up with her? What a heel! She won’t think so, but she’s well rid of him. But I’m sorry for her pain. Been there… Great, moving, six.
July 31, 2011 at 1:50 pm
I don’t understand why there’s joy on his face… though, as always, I love the creepiness of this story
July 31, 2011 at 2:00 pm
This is such a sad part of this story.
July 31, 2011 at 2:36 pm
Love how he holds her to comfort her even though he’s leaving. Shows concern on his part
July 31, 2011 at 4:12 pm
What is he so happy about? What a jerk. He could have at least tried to hide it from her.
July 31, 2011 at 4:27 pm
How very sad!
July 31, 2011 at 8:02 pm
Mary, let me give you a piece of advice my mom gave me. It has proven true a good bit of the time — Men are no damn good. LOL Great six. Thanks for sharing.
August 1, 2011 at 12:13 am
The joy on his face? He sounds like such a jerk!!
August 2, 2011 at 8:29 pm
Poor Mary. It’s a shame life shaped her expectations that way.
August 8, 2011 at 3:26 pm
I don’t like him at all! Great six!