New Shiny Sunday

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Thanks to Rebecca Royce I have a new shiny project. This WIP hits close to home as the heroine has a job that isvery close to what I do. I will make sure to give her a better, more complicated love life, and a nicer home.

So here is a small snippet of the first draft…

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Monday I would be paraded around the hospital by the disgustingly cheery human resources woman. She dressed like a “proper” southern woman. I’ve been southern my whole life and still don’t know why that means polyester clothing, helmet hair, and enough perfume to choke the unconscious man on the stretcher in the elevator with us.

Her accent was syrup-southern, the one that women put on in the south when they don’t like you and are pretending to be polite. I hate that sound. I always look for the knife because overly nice southern women are planning something and I want to make sure I see it coming.

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This project has hijacked my brain for the near future. ;)

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Graylin

34 Comments

  1. Love the attitude :D

    Looking forward to learning more.

  2. Love the description of southern women. You got that right! :D

  3. Woohoo! New project!
    Damn Rebecca and her ideas ;-)

  4. Oh my gosh, you TOTALLY nailed the whole Southern thing! *Sigh* Reminds me of such fond memories.

  5. Ha, was just about to write what Gem said! Very funny description!

  6. It sounds like a great story evolving for you. I loved the description. Thank you for sharing it, so early in it’s life.

  7. Great description of a southern woman ;-)

  8. Really authentic description! Evocative!

  9. Not only did I love the character’s attitude, but I adored the description. I could totally see the situation play out. Great six.

  10. Great description. I can see that woman.

  11. gr8 WIP you have there. wonderful descriptions, i can see her in my mind. nicely done.

  12. Love the attitude and description!

    As Rebecca also blessed me last week with a plot bunny I just tip my hat to you for going with it! I can’t wait to see what happens!

  13. Being from the South, I could hear that syrupy sweet twang in my head as I read. Nicely done…

  14. Love, love, LOVE this description and the insight into your character. Whoever said you nailed it…yeppers! Kudos to you…and to Rebecca for whatever she did/said to get this on the page.

    (Please don’t take this the wrong way…but I like this voice much better than the fairy-elf-whimsy.)

  15. Excellent six! They set us up for where the heroine is and what she thinks of all the posturing! Love it!

    Siobhan

  16. Keep going. Love how you describe the woman

  17. You’re setting up a very interesting storyline. I’m liking your MC already and want to see what you do from here.

  18. Sounds like you’re off to a great start! The information that comes across in this Six is very telling. Not only about the Southern woman, but about the person’s whose POV you’re in! Very well done! And, BTW, I bought an IPad for my daughter for her birthday and plan on getting her hooked on your YA novels! I know she will enjoy them as much as I do! It arrives this week! Yeah!

  19. I am a southern woman and I can hear and see her vivdly. Nicely done, Graylin. Reminds me of that famous southerrn sayin’ “Bless your heart.” which really means I want to brutally murder you.

  20. To say I know women like that would be a bit of an understatement. *scratches the scars on her back* LOL

  21. Such a great description!

  22. I can testify your description of that type of Southern women is 100% accurate. I’m not a “proper” Southern woman myself but I will admit to using that syrup voice you mention, in the exact way you describe. You nailed this, it’s awesome!

  23. Only six lines and already I’m hooked! The voice is clear and wonderfully real. I’m from the south–I know those women you’re describing. She’d better be careful! Great six!

  24. Your descriptions are spot-on. Well done!

  25. Love the characters voice and the descriptions! I look forward to reading more. :)

  26. Love her voice. Enjoyed your six.

  27. “overly nice southern women are planning something “… that’s because we are all S.L.U.T. S.(Southern Ladies Up To Something!)

  28. Very intriguing! Great six!

  29. Y’all gotta problem with women from the South? *bats eyelashes*

  30. What a vivid description. Spot on.

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